Anh/Chị check lỗi ngữ pháp giùm em với!
Everyone has a hobby of yours, and so am i.My hoppy is writing everything, I started this hobby when I was six years old .My family also agrees with my hobby.Maybe a lot of people think this is a strange hobby because every day we have to write, many people are too bored cause write too much at school.But i think this is an interesting act to kill time.Because i like writing, the diary has become my daily routine.When I write something,it help me relax and pleasure.Writing is a good hobby,because writing a lot can help your handwritten letter get better and better .It’s very important to have a hobby,some hobbies can also benefit you financially and spiritually .
Anh/Chị check lỗi ngữ pháp giùm em với! Everyone has a hobby of yours, and so am i.My hoppy is writing everything, I started this hobby when I was six
By Sarah
Everyone has a hobby of yours, and so am I. My hoppy is writing everything, I started this hobby when I was six years old. My family also agrees with my hobby. Maybe a lot of people think this is a strange hobby because every day we have to write, many people are too bored cause write too much at school. But I think this is an interesting act to kill time. Because I like writing, the diary has become my daily routine. When I write something, it help me relax and pleasure. Writing is a good hobby, because writing a lot can help your handwritten letter get better and better. It’s very important to have a hobby, some hobbies can also benefit you financially and spiritually.
Sau hobby bỏ dấu ‘,’
help → helps
=>
1. hoppy -> hobby ( My hoppy is writing everything)
2. help -> helps ( it help me relax)
3. cause write -> because of writing
4. act -> action
5. the diary bạn nên thay bằng writing diary
6. ,because ( trước because trong trường hợp ày không nên dùng ddaausphaayr)