I have read about the floods in Nghe An.There had been to much rain on two(2) months.The floods is a large amount of water covering an area usually dry.It occured in 2010 in Nghe An,the central of VietNam.Many peoples, animals and plants were died by the floods.Rescue workers brought many foods,water, blankets and medicals supplies for the victims of the floods.In my opinion,the student’s should save money to help the victims of the floods disasters.
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I have read about the floods in Nghe An.There had been to much rain on two(2) months.The floods is a large amount of water covering an area usually dr
By Samantha
I have read about the floods => flood ( danh từ ko đếm được ko thêm s) in Nghe An.There had been to much rain ( ko bao giờ much đi với rain sửa thành rain a lots on two(2) months.The floods( như trên) is a large amount of water covering an area usually dry.It occured in 2010 in Nghe An,the central of VietNam. Many peoples, animals and plants were died by the floods.Rescue workers brought many foods,water, blankets and medicals supplies for the victims of the floods.In my opinion,the student’s should save money to help the victims of the floods disasters.
I have read about the floods in Nghe An.There had been to much => nên sửa thành : rain a lots rain on two(2) months.The floods is a large amount of water covering an area usually dry.It occured in 2010 in Nghe An,the central of VietNam.Many peoples, animals and plants were died by the floods.Rescue workers brought many foods,water, blankets and medicals supplies for the victims of the floods.In my opinion,the student’s => students should save money to help the victims of the floods disasters.
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