1.About your hobby
My hobby is listening to music. I have started this hobby since I was a child. I always listening to music in the morning and in the evening. In the morning, when I listening to music, I have a lot of energy and spirit in the morning. And in the evening, it help I can easily fall asleep. Some people say that this hobby is boring, but I think it isn’t. Can be said that music is the best cure for our souls, and it can help us relax after a long tired day. The music can make everything funnier. When you listen to great melody, you can see the life is more beautiful.
2. About the volunteer work you want to do and give reasons.
In Vietnam, almost everyone, has been a volunteer work and I have too. At my age, I have not been donate blood so I often donate books, toys and clothes for street children and homeless people. I often do this work with my mother. Latest here on Sunday, I with my mother was used to donate books and clothes for a charity organization. In here, I met the orphans children. I played with them. Then I gave candies to them. They were all very happy. Some people think doing volunteer work is waste of time but in my opinion, doing volunteer work help me relax after school and it. When I doing this work, I feel very happy to bring happiness to them
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1. Câu “I always listening ……” phải chuyển “listening” thành “listen”
Câu “In the morning when I listening ……” cũng chuyển “listening” thành “listen” và nên bỏ cụm từ “in the morning” ở cuối câu vì đầu câu đã có rồi
Câu tiếp theo phải chuyển “it help I can ……” thành “it help me to fall asleep more easily”
2. Bỏ dấu phẩy ở sau từ “almost everyone” và chuyển cả câu thành “In Vietnam, everyone has done volunteer work and me too”
Câu thứ 2 chuyển thành “At my age, I cannot donate blood but I can donate books, toys and clothes for street children and homeless people”
Câu 3 “Last Sunday, my mother and I donated books and clothes to a charity organization”
Câu 4 “I met a lot of orphan children here”
Câu 5 có thể gộp với câu 6 và câu 7 ” I played with the children and then gave them candies, they were all very happy”
Câu 8 và câu 9 “Some people think that doing volunteer work is wasting time but in my opinion, doing volunteer work helps me relax after school and when I do it, I feel very happy because I can bring happiness to them”
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CHÚC EM HỌC TỐT!!!!