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Hello ! Today, I will talk about the transformation of the countryside. First of all, the people in the countryside are better equipped with many modern electrical appliances such as television, refrigerator, … That has made the living conditions of the people easier. Second, many established companies, hospitals and factories have greatly improved the living conditions of residents. In addition, in the past, people built houses in the countryside but now they are built with bricks. Now in the countryside people do not use oil lamps anymore, but instead use electric lamps. Not only that, in the past, people were riding and walking but now they use motorbikes … In short, the countryside now has a lot of changes no longer like before that makes Everyone’s life got better
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câu cuối bạn viết thế này sẽ hợp lý hơn ” In short, the countryside now has many changes, unlike before, creating people’s lives. up.”
Hello ! Today, I will talk about changes in the countryside. First of all, the people in the countryside are better equipped with many modern electrical appliances such as televisions, refrigerators, … That has made the living conditions of the people improved. Second, many established companies, hospitals and factories have significantly improved the living conditions of residents. In addition, in the past, in the countryside, people built houses with old wooden panels and the roof was lined with straw, but now the house is built of bricks. Now, people in the countryside do not use kerosene lamps anymore, but instead use electric lamps. Not only that, in the past, people used to ride a beautiful car, walk, now use a motorbike …In short, a lot of changes have been made in the countryside now, so life in the countryside has also been improve, better life than before
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