Cho em hỏi bài này có sai ngữ pháp gì không?
Có thì sửa giúp em ạaaa
Đây ạ :
The means of transport I use is a bicycle
Almost every day, I often use it to go to school
Cycling to school is very useful
It can help me exercise every day
Of course it can also protect the environment
But it also has a lot of not good things
For example, when we ride a bicycle we cannot ride a bicycle very far
And cycling will not go fast, because bicycles are very slow
I may have difficulty when bikes broken
Sai ở: often, exercise, not good, a bicycle
The means of transport I use is a bicycle
Almost every day, I often use it to go to school
– Có ”every day” rồi mà often thì hơi bất hợp lí, theo mình nên bỏ “often”.
Cycling to school is very useful
It can help me exercise every day
– to exercise. Form: S+help+O+to V.
Of course it can also protect the environment
But it also has a lot of not good things
– bạn thay bằng “bad”.
For example, when we ride a bicycle we cannot ride a bicycle very far
– dùng “it” để thay, không nên lặp từ.
And cycling will not go fast, because bicycles are very slow I may have difficulty when bikes broke
– can