gạch chân những từ thừa và ba lỗi ngữ pháp. sau đó sửa và viết lại email hi matty, Thanks for your email. I would like writing about my new house

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   hi matty, Thanks for your email. I would like to write about my new house. It’s in a quiet area, so we sleep very well at night. It’s big, bright and airy. The living room is modern. My parent’s bedroom is larger than mine. The kitchen looks tidy and nice. The two bathrooms are very clean. I like my house a lot . Looking forward to seeing you soon!

   Kind wishes regards,

   Tom

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2. Hi matty,

   Thanks for your email. I would like writing about my new house.

   It’s in a quiet area, so we sleep very well at night. It’s big, bright and airy. The living room is modern. My parent’s bedroom is larger than my. The kitchen look tidy and nice. The two bathrooms is very clean. I like my house a lot of.

   Looking forward to seeing you soon!

   Kind wishes regards,

   Lisa.

    

    

   Hi, matty,

   Thanks for your email. I would like to write about my new house.
   It’s in a quiet area, so we sleep very well at night. It’s big, bright and airy. The living room is modern. My parent’s bedroom is larger than mine. The kitchen looks tidy and nice. The two bathrooms are very clean. I like my house a lot.

   Looking forward to seeing you soon!

   Kind wishes regards,

   Lisa.

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