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I used to attend the tomato festival. It’s called La Tomatina. It’s held every year in Bunol, Spain every last Wednesday of August. There are thousands of people who come to this festival. At this festival, people throw tomatoes at each other. The week of La Tomatina is full of music, parades, dancing, and fireworks. It was interesting. I would love to come back to Spain for the festival again.
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I used to participate in the tomato festival. It is called La Tomatina. It is held annually in Bunol, Spain on the last Wednesday of August. There are thousands of people coming to this festival. At this festival, people throw tomatoes at 11 a.m. we saw a jet of water coming from the water cannons and the chaos began. La Tomatina Week is filled with music, parades, dance and fireworks. It’s very interesting. I would love to go back to Spain to attend the festival again.
It’s called La Tomatina.
–> It CALLED La Tomatina.
It’s held every year in Bunol, Spain every last Wednesday of August.
–> It was held every year in Bunol, Spain every last Wednesday of August.
There are thousands of people who come to this festival.
–> Mình nghĩ là “Thousands of people who come and enjoy this festival.” hay hơn