Viết bài luận bằng tiếng anh về tác hại của việc sử dụng công nghệ như máy tính điện thoại quá nhiều ( có 2 mặt xấu và tốt )

Firstly, it is agreed, most people work on computers nowadays and work a lot will make them feeling stressed a lot. Working all day long with the computer also makes their eyes blurred and feeling quite tired. This can make their health worse and worse without their knowing. It can even affect your beauty,
it can make your skin pale or you may look like a dead body at work as everyone sees.
Secondly, it’s disagreed, some people might work on computers long but they know how to use them in a much reasonable way. They know how to use them perfectly so it will not cost them so much health problems as people who do not know how to use computers. They have knowledge about computer and  use them perfectly so they can not being so stressful