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Đ????̂̀: Viết đoạn văn so sánh về cuộc sống nông thông với thành thị
There are many differences between the life in the countryside and in the city. The countryside has many small houses. The people are friendly and the air is unpolluted. The food is cheap and fresh. However the life in the countryside is very quiet and boring. In the city, the buildings are tall and modern. The life in the city is more comfortable than in the countryside. The traffic jam is noisy and the people are busy. I like living in the city because the life is more modern and interesting than in the countryside
There are many differences between the life in the countryside and in the city. The countryside has many small houses. The people are friendly and the air is unpolluted . The food is cheap and fresh. However the life in the countryside is very quiet and boring. In the city, the buildings are tall and modern. The life in the city is more comfortable than in the countryside. The traffic jam is noisy and the people are busy. I like living in the city because the life is more modern and interesting than in the countryside .
Có thể sửa là : air is unpolluted => fresh air
Có thể sửa là : quiet and => bỏ vì yên bình thể hiện tích cực
/ Chỉ cần sửa như trên hoặc không cũng được tùy bn theo ý kiến của mk là vậy /
Dòng 1 đổi between thành from.
Dòng 4 đổi the air is unpolluted thành the air is fresh.
Dòng 6 bỏ quiet and.