Đoạn văn này có nhiều lỗi sai, hãy sửa lại chúng. (Sửa quá khứ đơn thành thì tương lai đơn) I want to raise funds and gathere many textbooks and cloth

Đoạn văn này có nhiều lỗi sai, hãy sửa lại chúng. (Sửa quá khứ đơn thành thì tương lai đơn)
I want to raise funds and gathere many textbooks and clothes. We raise funds because we wanted to give some scholarships to the most excellent students there. Then we also bought new books and pens to give to every student in the village. We hoped we could help them a little bit. Although we gave some little things, we felt that we could share something. The children there were happy to receive our gifts. We were also very happy and we hoped we could help to bring a change.
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  1. I want to raise funds and gather many textbooks and clothes. We raise funds because we will want to give some scholarships to the most excellent students there. Then we’ll also buy new books and pens to give to every student in the village. We’ll hope we can help them a little bit. Although we’ll give some little things, we’ll feel that we’ll share something. The children there will be happy to receive our gifts. We’ll also be very happy and we’ll hope we’ll help to bring a chance

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  2. gathere → gather

    Wanted → want

    Give to → give

    Hope → hope

    Could → can

    Gave → will give

    Felt → will fell

    Could → ∅

    Were → will be

    were → will be

    Hoped→ hope

    Could → can

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