I want to help poor children. First, I teach children English and other subjects. We help them play some games, it is funny. Then, we help the farmer collect their harvest. Some of us plant trees along the street and clean the village. This volunteer is very interesting because I can help poor people. I love this activity.
Mọi người sửa giúp em ạ,với lại em cũng thấy em viết còn thiếu sót,ko trọn nghĩa,mọi người có thể gợi ý cho em vài câu từ cho phù hợp được không ạ !!
I want to help poor children. First, I teach children English and other subjects. We help them play some games, it is funny. Then, we help the farmer
By Serenity
First, I teach children English and other subjects.
= > First, I want to teach children English and some other subjects.
We help them play some games, it is funny.
= > Second, we will help them to play some games, it’s will be fun.
= >Then, we help the farmer collect their harvest. = > X ( Poor children not the farmers )
= > Some of us plant trees along the street and clean the village.
= > Some of us will plant trees along the street and clean the village.
I want to help poor people in some small villages in my country. First, I will go to the orphanage, I will teach some poor children English and other subjects. I will also tell them some games to play, too. It is funny. Then, I go to the farm of some families to help the farmers collect their harvest. Some of us plant trees along the street and clean the village. This work is very interesting because I can help poor people. I really love this activity.
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