If I could travel, I’d like to visit Japan. Japan is a beautiful country, with many famous landscapes such as Osaka Castle, Mount Fuji, … Especially

If I could travel, I’d like to visit Japan. Japan is a beautiful country, with many famous landscapes such as Osaka Castle, Mount Fuji, … Especially in the cherry blossom season, you can walk while watching the flowers with your friends, relatives. It’s great!
Japan is also a country with delicious dishes such as sushi, fresh seafood, … Japanese people are very kind and hospitable, although they are quiet but they are very likable people.
In short, Japan is a great country to visit.
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