I went to Da Lat city with my family yesterday .The weather here was fine.It was sunny all the time . We stayed a hotel . The hotel is small but comfortable .In Da Lat , the buildings are tall and modern, the people are friendly and the food is cheap and delicous . We visited Cam Ly and Frenn waterfalls . Tommorrow ,we’re going on a trip to Langbiang.I think it will be very interesting.
Mn chấm giúp e có sai chỗ nào Và thêm ý nào ko ạk????????
I went to Da Lat city with my family yesterday .The weather here was fine.It was sunny all the time . We stayed a hotel . The hotel is small but comfo
By Parker
Mk nghĩ here -> in here
chỗ trống giữa stayed vs a -> in a
cs thể thêm very giữa but và comfortable
mk nghĩ is = are
we are going bạn sửa thành we will go on a trip to langbiang nhá . tommorrow khi dùng thì ta đi với will nhá
ở chỗ con người bn viết dài ra ngoài từ peole are friendly ta còn có helpful , lovely , ….
câu đồ ăn bn có thể sử dụng so sánh hơn nhá
nhìn chung bài của bn đầy đủ hết rùi
@DUNG@(!)@))(
cho mk xin 1 ctlhn , 5 sao , 1camr ơn