Storm is one of the most dangerous disaters facing the world today. It usually occurs in the rainy season and occurs most often in central Vietnam and

Storm is one of the most dangerous disaters facing the world today. It usually occurs in the rainy season and occurs most often in central Vietnam and coastal. The storms cause a lot of damage to people and property. A lot of people become homeless and lose all their possessions. Not only that, they also suffer the pain of losing their relatives. There are some ways to prepare prepare for storms. First used to always update the news about the storms. Second you should prepare essential things such as water, food, clothes, medicines, first-aid kits,… Third, we should reinforce our house and always be ready to evacuate. Natural disasters are extremely dangerous, but we can prevent them.
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    The storm is one of the most dangerous disasters facing the world today. It usually occurs in the rainy season and occurs most often in central Vietnam and the coastal. The storms cause a lot of damage to people and property. A lot of people become homeless and lose all their possessions. Not only that, but they also suffer the pain of losing their relatives. There are some ways to prepare for storms. First, get used to constantly update the news about the storms. Second, you should prepare essential things such as water, food, clothes, medicines, first-aid kits,… Third, we should reinforce our house and always be ready to evacuate. Natural disasters are hazardous, but we can prevent them.

     

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    Storm is one of the most dangerous disaters facing the world today. It usually occurs in the rainy season and occurs most often in central Vietnam and coastal. The storms=> It (tránh lặp từ)  cause a lot of damage to people and property. Moreover(hơn thế nữa), a lot of people become homeless and (trên kia dùng property: tài sản= possesions rồi nhé nên mình thay từ) => go begging. Not only that, they also suffer the pain of losing their relatives. Consequently (do đó), there are some ways to prepare for storms. Firstly, used to always update the news about the storms. Secondly, you should prepare essential things such as water, food, clothes, medicines, first-aid kits,… Last but not least, we should reinforce our house and always be ready to evacuate. Natural disasters are extremely dangerous, but we can prevent them. 

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